I AM TIRED OF LOOKING AT MY RESUME. I APPLIED FOR 100+ REALIZED. I MADE SPELLING MISTAKES ON MY RESUME. YOU KNOW I AM VERY SAD AND FRUSTRATED. I WILL LEAVE MY CURRENT JOB IN JUNE. I NEED A NEW JOB :(

THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP.

OBJECTIVE: Succeeding from a competitive business environment whereby I can easily capitalize on my buyer service ability and sturdy work ethic.

EDUCATION
Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008
Human Resources Management
Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
G. P. A. 3. 70 / 4. 0

Bachelor involving Arts with Political Science Graduation: May 2006
Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
G. P. A. 3. 21 / 4. 0 (Completed 4-year program with three years)

WORK EXPERIENCE
Graduate Assistant towards Chair August 2006-Present Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
•Manage move on students’ recognized documents in addition to entrance information
•Organize discussion / internship / fund opportunities
•Update department site and schedule training within the university databases
•Conduct studies in addition to reviews for any Chair along with the MBA plan coordinator
Student employee (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Sodexho, USA
•Assisted the final manager within arranging plus organizing numerous eating places on campus
•Provided strong group function and assist to attain this goals from the company
Intern May-August, july 2004 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D. C.
•Assisted your Minister / Deputy Chief associated with Mission (International Relations)
•Verified official docs (passport, visa, naturalization, as well as legalization)
PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
•Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008
•Website Development Training September, 2007
•OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007
•Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007
INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Organized in addition to hosted “Women as well as Children within Japanese Society” Speech and also Dinner, that invitee phone speaker appeared to be your First Secretary associated with this Consulate General involving Japan in New York, Fall 2005.

Assisted this Thai Minister / Deputy Chief of Mission plus organized “A Taste connected with Thailand” Gala Dinner, good results with the post-tsunami support of classes along with living conveniences for that orphans throughout Thailand, Summer 2005.
Served because Vice President from the Asia Club at Edinboro University, sorted an educative holiday that will Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute connected with Technology, Spring 2004.
AWARDS
Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008
SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006
Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005
ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003

SKILLS

Microsoft Office Applications
Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and also Presenting Data)
Communication Skills (English and Thai)


References, Writing Samples, and also Portfolios Available Upon Request

Hi

It's not bad although it's definitely not extremely compelling.

I indicate by means of this kind of that it doesn't persuade me, being an job interviewer which I can't do with out you.

You need to sell off your experience, ability as well as achievements more, using positive, persausive plus active language.

Take a review of this kind of case in point application so that you can find just what I mean.

I edited your resume with MS Word. Looks great. I designed a couple of improvements as well as reposting that below to your remaining review. Good Luck!

OBJECTIVE
Seeking a new challenging business environment in which I will assist an agency making use of my communication, corporation along with similar skills.

(note: I will change the objective for you to customise for each job, along with cite so what you need to complete presently there and what people can deliver into the dining room table that could populate their latest position position need. )

WORK EXPERIENCE
August 2006
Graduate Assistant to the Chair as well as President, Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
• Managed scholar student files plus admission files (what simply does this specific mean?)
• Organize conferences, internships, and grant opportunities
• Assisted current team internet site plus schedule tutorials about your university databases
• Conducted research and reviews for the division Chair and for the actual MBA Program Coordinator

August 2004-February 2008
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Sodexho, Inc. USA
• Assisted the overall manager around arranging along with arranging different eateries upon campus
• Promoted group operate treatments along with recognized corporation goals

May-August 2005
Internship.
The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, DC.
• Worked together with the Minister / Deputy Chief with Mission (International Relations)
• Verified public documents (passport, visa, naturalization, plus legalization)

EDUCATION
Master involving Public Administration Graduation&#58; May 2008
Human Resources Management
Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
GPA&#58; 3. 70 / 4. 0

Bachelor connected with Arts in Political Science Graduation&#58; May 2006
Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
GPA&#58; 3. 21 / 4. 0 (Completed 4-year course around three years)

PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
• Member involving Society with regard to Human Resource Management, 2007-2008
• Website Development Training September 2007
• OSDBU Procurement Conference, April 2007
• Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series Program, March 2007

INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Fall 2005, New York.
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• Organized and hosted “Women along with Children in Japanese Society. ” A basic dinner plus conversing wedding using the First Secretary of the Consulate General associated with Japan.

Summer 2005, >>>INSERT DINNER LOCATION (CITY) HERE<<<
Assistant on the Thai Minister / Deputy Chief of Mission.
• Organized “A Taste of Thailand” Gala Dinner&#58; an improvement for your post-tsunami support of schools plus being features to the orphans around Thailand.
• Served because the Vice President with this Asia Club from Edinboro University

Spring 2004
• Organized a good academic trip that will Harvard University, in addition to for the Massachusetts Institute with Technology (MIT). >>>WHAT DID YOU DO THERE. RELEVANT TO JOB APPLYING?<<<

SCHOLARLY AWARDS
• Graduate Assistantship, 2006-2008
• SILVER Academic Award, 2005-2006
• Julie Lieber International Scholarship, 2004-2005
• ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003

ADDITIONAL SKILLS
• Microsoft Office&#58; Word, Excel , Power Point, other >>>RE PC SKILLS&#58; PROB OPTIONAL, IT IS ASSUMED YOU SHOULD KNOW HOW TO DO THIS. OK DELETE<<<
• Public Speaking, Research & Analyzing Data / Statistics.
• Bi-Lingual. Fluent Reading, Writing, and Speaking inside English plus Thai

Writing Samples, Portfolios along with References Upon Request >>> PROB DELETE THIS. THEY WILL ASK IF THEY WANT IT<<<

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Note&#58; Would suggest to Bold-type each and every topic
Nice Work!
Good Luck!

In your current objective lose "Strong function ethic" But I such as the change. . The previous intent you had has not been good. SAnd liek I stated before, You are usually quite expert plus talented. . . nevertheless each and every thing you've accomplished that you experienced isn't needed!!! Nobody hopes to read just about all involving that. Make numerous resumes to get different employment types. . . ONLY PUT THE EXPERIENCE RELEVANT TO THE POSITION APPLYING FOR NOT ALL THE EXPERIENCE YOU'VE HAD IN YOUR LIFETIME.

I could keep that GPAs away from along with position the schedules from a kept give column very first after that the advice inside a minute column. Makes the circulation a lot easier as well as makes it possible for the actual interview panel member to getting a rapid time line.

You also have to try out & keep that to be able to a single page--most interviews hardly ever get past the best one--so put one of the most recently available & best power goods there, re-work some of the wordier sentences. Good luck